Hi, i need a revision of my paper. Below i have attached the original paper and then i have attached RED comments throughout my paper that need to be fixed or added. There are 4 pages in the paper that have to be revised and those are the red comments.
I also need an x and y axis on the graph.
And i also need a longer HYPOTHESIS for this paper.

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